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Mr Carrot

One day there was a carrot walking to his school,on the way he met his friend.His friend asked the carrot not to go to school,and played at play ground.Finally carrot followed friend playing at play ground after that carrot play PS in the department store with his friend.Carrot didn’t care wait about his school,because carrot only think as friend.

Carrot didn’t that as friend not good and just be carrot naughty!tomorrow carrot went to school.At svhool carrot got punishment from teacher because yesterday he was asked.Finally carrot realized mistake and he promised not do it again.And carrot see already follow invite friend not raelly.

So,we should’nt look like who is easy to be influenced by has we.We also have to be independent  be smart to choose friend whether he is good on not for us have to.

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My House Is My Paradise

     My house is my paradise because when i am there, i will comfortable.My house big and very clean,my also has a very wide garden.Everyday i alwasy read magazine in the garden and i always clean my house.I want my house always clean and fragrant and i want my house always ordely.

     Everyday i always watering flowers in front my house and dont foget i clean the grass in the garden house in garden house very much grass so i am everyday clean grass.I want my garden always clean and dity.I like speeding my time at home because when i am there,i feel comfortable  my house also has a very wide garden.Everyday i always read magazine and searcing inspiration in garden.